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This my entry for the Hp-Art-Project, it's for the quidditch world cup chapter in the GoF (if you couldn't tell :( )

This has taken me 36 hoursish so far. It's ALMOST finished, Im basically trying to touch it up and finish it off.

I inspired the feel and atmosphere from football matches (soccer), I reckon I should add a few screamers in there. Im a little worried that the crowd don't look magical enough. although I kinda like the idea of everything seeming normalish and what the omnioculars are seeing being the biggest hint to magic haha.

I reckon Harry needs a little more expression possibly..

Also Im wondering if the omniocular lenses are not detailed enough. I made the drawings of the quidditch player kinda vague because it's supposed to be a reflection, HOWEVER im not too sure if it works. Please let me know if this sticks out to you like a sore thumb?

Let me know about the whole image aswell, if theres anything that is particularly shite... or even if the whole image is shite haha go for it.

EDIT: I've changed it the crowd a bit and also harry's mouth. I noticed that on my PC computer screen the picture is HIDEOUSLY dark.. in fact the sky is supposed to be blue, but on the PC it looked black! Not to mention heavily saturated. Im not sure how to deal with this problem, does anyone know anything about it?

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:iconouaf:
Don't worry, I could tell what it was at first sight : D It's really well done, the details are quite amazing.

About the omniocular... I don't know, it seems fine to me :/ (sorry I'm not very good at criticism ): )

But the composition is nice, you can really feel the atmosphere : )

also long scarf is long. o:

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:iconmafer:
wow this looks amazing.
the coloring is awesome :clap: you did a good job there. the omniocular lenses looks good :D

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:iconbroshang:
looks awesome. nice job!

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:iconcarsis:
Well,
it looks quite amazing to me :hmm:

though if I where you I would add some more different expressions in the crowd.There just seems to be too many people with the same D8 expression. :XD:

the sky also, looks quite just plain black. I would at least add some highlights to some clouds or something around the moon. just to add just a little more interest.

when I first looked at this, my eye followed Harry's scarf all the way to the top, and that actually was the first thing that came to mind.

Feel free to completely ignore me though if you wish :XD: Those are just my two cents,
:iconconstantine2530:
I think it's really good (especially the omniculars) but yeah, a lil bit more reaction from the crowd I guess.
Ooooh, still gotta do my other pic for the damned project! x.x

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:iconhippie-girl:
GREAT composition (I especially love the way you use Harry's scarf to fill the otherwise empty section of the sky), good perspective and excellent depth. I think Ron's expression is probably my favorite thing! :love:

The omnioculars look good, though the perspective does seem slightly wonky. It could just be me, but I feel like his face is too straight-on to be looking through the omnioculars, which are more in profile. Like he's sort of tilting them off to the side.

...You know actually, now that I look at it, I think it's just that his mouth is not really in perspective––it's facing the viewer straight-on while the rest of Harry's head is turning. That's all it is.

Haha, sorry to accidentally criticize more than was necessary. :doh:

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:iconmakani:
omg freaking awesome
:iconcluedog:
The color, characterizations, and the angle in this image are all just excellent.

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:iconwotchertonks7:
This is amazing! Good luck!

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:iconfishbizkit:
This is awwwesome!

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